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I feel like escaping reality
I'll venture inside my head
no rules to follow
no rules to swallow
nothing fake yet nothing real
just colors and shapes and voices
inside my head

blobs of color flashing by
red green blue purple orange yellow
next to talking pillows that fly
on top of lingering hellos and goodbyes
from the outside world
inside my head

while little people socialize
with dense jungles of jelly
till sundown to sunrise
music plays loudly
so little dresses dance
to slide shows of pictures
beside clouds that glance
this way and that
inside my head

out of nowhere
comes Game my trusty conscience
singing a tune from a faraway land
he gives me his hand
and says you're needed out there
then I wake up and ask,
"Do you dare to venture
inside your head?"
©2007-2009 ~Jenni9206
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OH MY GOD! I actually wrote a poem........I actually wrote something and submitting it.

Anyways, I had to write this for English class. I made a 97. I don't get how you can get graded for your emotion and creativity. I also don't get how a teacher can change the word of a poem you wrote when she knows perfectly well that you meant to write it that way and didn't want it changed. She effing took points off because I used "till" instead of "from". EFFING GAY YO!!!!

OK I'm done ranting. You can comment now. Don't be harsh!

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This is *quite* nice, i've always liked the thought of someone losing themselves inside their mind to escape reality and the pressures of life.

And even your comment ruled:

"I don't get how you can get graded for your emotion and creativity."

So true.

Aww, me really likes this poem -fave- good job loli D:

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Yay, thank you. :glomp:
your the 2nd person to fave this. I wasn't expecting that.

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